Wall+Street+Journal+Paper

Looks good. I set aside a few hours this morning to edit but I don't really have any changes. Thanks for getting it put together and polished yesterday guys. -Karissa

Here is the final copy with edits added

Adam, I have done a basic edit of the paper. Some sections were switched around a tiny bit, I improved a few sentences here and there, and I erased the part that I agreed did not need to be in the paper. I cannot upload it for some strange reason, so I'll have to email it to you.

The file below is the draft, please alert me of any issues by 12pm monday. i will print it and bring it in.

Attached is a paper containing the salient points for 7 of the 8 articles uploaded. I left one out because I wasn't sure how relevant it was.

Also included, for convenience, is the starting bibliography.

I made very few efforts to put my own thoughts in - mostly, I summarized it and reworded it. Every sentence is referenced because I wasn't sure if the paragraphs would remain together.

-- Jane

Rough Draft of my section __Karissa